Hi Tane, Ryan here, on slide nine you have said something about a black mat, you should say what you are talking about and what the black mat was. How long did it take you do finish all nine laps?
Hi Tane, Ryan here from Awahono School. Your slideshow is hard to read because your animations are spinning and fading and are really fast which doesn't give you enough time to read your writing. How long did it take you to make your slideshow? Maybe you can slow the spinning down. I liked how you have added detail to your sentences because it paints a good picture in your mind. From Ryan
Hi there It's Adam I like your slideshow. Did you like the fun run?
ReplyDeleteI ran 4 laps,next time you could maybe you can get someone to check your spelling.
Thanks Adam. I did have fun. Did you have fun?
ReplyDeleteHi Tane, Ryan here, on slide nine you have said something about a black mat, you should say what you are talking about and what the black mat was. How long did it take you do finish all nine laps?
ReplyDeleteHi Tane my name is Hannah from Awahono school.You could say what the black mat is for.
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Hi Tane, my name is Leatham I like how you have you explain your Fun Run Day.Was your Fun Run Day fuuny?
ReplyDeleteHi Tane, Ryan here from Awahono School. Your slideshow is hard to read because your animations are spinning and fading and are really fast which doesn't give you enough time to read your writing. How long did it take you to make your slideshow? Maybe you can slow the spinning down. I liked how you have added detail to your sentences because it paints a good picture in your mind. From Ryan
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