In the holdays we had to find a page in the book that we are reading at home. Also we had to put the page numder down too and the author down. Here is my one.
Hey Tane, Jake here, I like your Holiday sentence. Maybe you could go over it and check your spelling in your sentence. I like the fonts you used on it. Keep up the great work! Kind regards -Jake
Hi Tane, Blake here from Awahono School. I like how you have put a picture of the book on it. Your sentence has a few spelling mistakes that you might need to fix. -Blake
Hey Tane, it's Ryan here. I like your holiday sentence. Your sentence is very descriptive. Next time you could fix up some of your spelling and add a illustration that reflects your sentence. Keep up the amazing work, From Ryan
Hey Tane, Jake here, I like your Holiday sentence. Maybe you could go over it and check your spelling in your sentence. I like the fonts you used on it. Keep up the great work!
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-Jake
thanks you commenting on my blog and I will do that.
DeleteHi my name is Fred from Awahono School. I like your sentence that you wrote, it is very good. I like it because you have described it very well.
ReplyDeleteHi Tane, Blake here from Awahono School. I like how you have put a picture of the book on it. Your sentence has a few spelling mistakes that you might need to fix.
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Ok i will do that.
DeleteHey Tane, it's Ryan here. I like your holiday sentence. Your sentence is very descriptive. Next time you could fix up some of your spelling and add a illustration that reflects your sentence. Keep up the amazing work, From Ryan
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