What is Blue?
Blue is the sea 
blue is the sky 
blue is the colour,
of a blueberry pie. 
Blue is solid
 Swift as the wind
 and the smell of 
a penguin fin
And in winter when the snow
 starts to fall
 It is the feeling
 of your ice cold hall
Blue is thick and cold as ice
 blue becomes the strongest
 colour in the rainbow. 
Blue is the colour
 of a diamond shining
Blue is the colour of distant mountains
 Blue is fog blue is a lake
It’s the darkest pen in the box
Blue is the colour of the
 skyscraper windows
the colour of a blue whale
 Blue is the colour of a glowing lightsaber
Blue is an M&M
Blue is the power
 of peacock feathers
Bubbles and moons are  blue
Blue is the colour of a fresh picked berry, 
from  the wet rainforest
Blue is the colour of fresh paint drying
Hi Tane, you and Solly chose some interesting, original images that kept my interest throughout the poem. I especially like the sentence: "Blue is thick and cold as ice." It was also a good idea to use a blue font. You have included some punctuation, and some more work on this would help to make your poem even better.
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