Wednesday 9 May 2018

What is Blue?

In room 5 we are learning to write a poem  about colours. Solly and I wrote a poem about blue. Here is ours.

What is Blue?
Blue is the sea
blue is the sky
blue is the colour,
of a blueberry pie.
Blue is solid
Swift as the wind
and the smell of
a penguin fin
And in winter when the snow
starts to fall
It is the feeling
of your ice cold hall
Blue is thick and cold as ice
blue becomes the strongest
colour in the rainbow.
Blue is the colour
of a diamond shining
Blue is the colour of distant mountains
Blue is fog blue is a lake
It’s the darkest pen in the box
Blue is the colour of the
skyscraper windows
the colour of a blue whale
Blue is the colour of a glowing lightsaber
Blue is an M&M
Blue is the power
of peacock feathers
Bubbles and moons are  blue
Blue is the colour of a fresh picked berry,
from  the wet rainforest

Blue is the colour of fresh paint drying

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tane, you and Solly chose some interesting, original images that kept my interest throughout the poem. I especially like the sentence: "Blue is thick and cold as ice." It was also a good idea to use a blue font. You have included some punctuation, and some more work on this would help to make your poem even better.
    Mrs Idle

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