How to be a Successful Learner

We are learning to be a succesful learners in room 5. We made a slide each and we took a  screen shot of our slide. Here is my one.

Swimming Race

We are learning to write a description of  when we are swimming making it look like we are in the scene.  We did our  swimming writing on the  Midland Line swimming races. This one is my one.

          Swimming

Splash! I dive into the clear blue water,  and start swimming fast. The water is refreshing as  I swing my arms and kick my legs as fast as I can.

As I turn  my head to breathe water gets into my mouth. I spit it out the salty water and keep on going. My heart is pumping and I start to get tired but I do not give up. People are cheering us on. I try not to crash into the colorful lane ropes.Looking through my clear goggles I can see the water getting shallower. My feet hit the bottom as I reach the finish line. I feel proud because I came first.

I go and sit on the bench watching  other people swimming. I feel puffed.  I stand up and cheer other people on who are swimming. They are going faster and faster and suddenly... they hit their heads on the end of the pool. They have finished.

All About Me

This is a slide about me.  We took a screenshot of the slides that we made. made. Here is my slide.

That was Summer

Room 5 made a poem about summer. We read an other  poem  about summer by Marci Ridlon. Here is my poem.

Summer

Remember that time

When you ran and you got tired

and  fell down on the ground

you  went in the pool and you jumped

in the pool and had fun

you went on camp

the grass was hot and dry

and you went home from camp

you  were lazy and tired

and  flopped on the ground?

Remember how you went and had  fun?

That was summer.

Remember that time

When you went and jumped in the lake

in the warm sun

we went to get some ice cream

and in was so hot  it melted all over you

you went skiing on the boat

and you fell off the ski

the boat driver was not going fast enough

had you ever done skiing before?

Remember how you fell off of the ski?

That was summer.

Remember that time

When you had Christmas with your

family and you had some presents

and you got so many presents you couldn’t open all of them

and you played with your cousins with two remote control tanks

and you wine it again and again

then the  cousins stopped playing

and you played Clash of Clans

Have you ever played with two remote control tanks before?

That was summer.