I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Friday, 13 April 2018
Total Annihilation 3
In room 5 Miro and I have been making Total Annihilation 3. To move in the slide show use your bottom right arrow keys. Total Annihilation number 3 has 709 slides. Tell me what you think of it please.
Thursday, 12 April 2018
My Swimming 2018
In Room 5 we made a swimming slide show. We wrote about swimming. Here is my swimming reflection.
Friday, 6 April 2018
Hunting and Fishing
In room 5 we are learning to describe and do present tense. We were writing about the Hunting and Fishing Competition. Here is my writing.

Then I walk to see the fish. I see a trout with black dots with blood running down with a red stripe that is blood. The fish has hooks going through it. It has some writing and it says 8kg and we cannot see the other fish writing on them. The eyes are drooping down and staring at people.
Hunting and Fishing Competition in Ahaura domain was my funniest year because I got a spot prize but I did not stay as long I would like.It was fun too also it was not my first time there.
Hunting and Fishing
Walking to the Hunting and Fishing Competition in the domain I’m excited to see all the deer hooked on the Ahaura Transport truck. A tractor lifts them onto the truck and a person measures the antlers. Then people help the tractor to put the deer on the truck. The deer are set down on the hooks on the truck. Then I walk to see the fish. I see a trout with black dots with blood running down with a red stripe that is blood. The fish has hooks going through it. It has some writing and it says 8kg and we cannot see the other fish writing on them. The eyes are drooping down and staring at people.
Hunting and Fishing Competition in Ahaura domain was my funniest year because I got a spot prize but I did not stay as long I would like.It was fun too also it was not my first time there.
Friday, 23 March 2018
How to be a Successful Learner
We are learning to be a succesful learners in room 5. We made a slide each and we took a screen shot of our slide. Here is my one.
Friday, 16 March 2018
Swimming Race
We are learning to write a description of when we are swimming making it look like we are in the scene. We did our swimming writing on the Midland Line swimming races. This one is my one.
Swimming
Splash! I dive into the clear blue water, and start swimming fast. The water is refreshing as I swing my arms and kick my legs as fast as I can.
As I turn my head to breathe water gets into my mouth. I spit it out the salty water and keep on going. My heart is pumping and I start to get tired but I do not give up. People are cheering us on. I try not to crash into the colorful lane ropes.Looking through my clear goggles I can see the water getting shallower. My feet hit the bottom as I reach the finish line. I feel proud because I came first.
I go and sit on the bench watching other people swimming. I feel puffed. I stand up and cheer other people on who are swimming. They are going faster and faster and suddenly... they hit their heads on the end of the pool. They have finished.
Friday, 9 March 2018
Friday, 2 March 2018
That was Summer
Room 5 made a poem about summer. We read an other poem about summer by Marci Ridlon. Here is my poem.
Summer
Remember that time
When you ran and you got tired
and fell down on the ground
you went in the pool and you jumped
in the pool and had fun
you went on camp
the grass was hot and dry
and you went home from camp
you were lazy and tired
and flopped on the ground?
Remember how you went and had fun?
That was summer.
Remember that time
When you went and jumped in the lake
in the warm sun
we went to get some ice cream
and in was so hot it melted all over you
you went skiing on the boat
and you fell off the ski
the boat driver was not going fast enough
had you ever done skiing before?
Remember how you fell off of the ski?
That was summer.
Remember that time
When you had Christmas with your
family and you had some presents
and you got so many presents you couldn’t open all of them
and you played with your cousins with two remote control tanks
and you wine it again and again
then the cousins stopped playing
and you played Clash of Clans
Have you ever played with two remote control tanks before?
That was summer.
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